On a September evening at 5.45 pm Madhumitha
was struck in the rush hour traffic of the Chennai city. By 6.00 pm She needs to be at Preethi’s place. How on
earth is she going to reach T-Nagar from Ashok Nagar in just 15 minutes?
Preethi is going to get upset for sure. Of course she would be upset, because
it’s her birthday and Madhumitha is one among her 4 best friends. Anyhow at
least by 6.45 pm now Madhumitha has
reached Preethi’s house. There was Madhu’s little crew waiting for her arrival
Gayathri (Gayu), Malini (Malu), Abirami (Abi).
As soon Madhu arrived Preethi
started to cut her Birthday cake. Preethi was waiting for her best friend Madhu
to reach. Now Malini goes "hey look there two good looking guys in that
crowd. The Blue shirt and Black shirt" pointing at the group of guys
laughing, cracking up jokes and talking to each other. They are Preethi’s twin
brother Pradeep’s friends. On a reply to Malini’s statement Abi said "oh
god please, when are you going to stop talking about guys. I am fed up of you."
Malini replied "yeah right you saint no wonder you are still single."
Then Madhu "Malu you always talk about guys this that etc., then why
aren't you in a relationship yet? Stop embarrassing Abi." Malini always
shuts up when Madhumitha or Preethi says something to her. Because they both
are smart and witty girls who make sure Malini is kept under control from
embarrassing anyone.
Now the
most annoying time that any birthday girl/boy would hate has come. Yes it’s the
birthday bumps time. Since Preethi is a girl she was spared from any birthday
bumps, but she had to go through the torture of cake make-up on her face.
Preethi’s friends took care of cake make-up on her face and Pradeep’s friends
did the honour of birthday bumps to him. In this chaos situation, accidentally
the blue shirt guy poured Pepsi on Madhu’s light green Salwar. The guy in blue
shirt goes “Hey I am sorry really sorry sorry”, Madhu with a fake smile “that’s
alright no problem.” Meanwhile Abi jumps into the conversation and scolds the
blue shirt guy who spilled Pepsi on Madhu. Malini is really worried right now
and tries to control Abi. Since the guy in the blue shirt is one of the two
good looking guys spotted by Malini earlier, no wonder she tries to defend him.
Now the
black shirt guy looking at Madhu says “hey come on yaar it’s just Pepsi. Stop
making it a big deal.”
Madhu:
“huh? JUST Pepsi?
Black
Shirt Guy: “yes yaar it is just Pepsi, it will go away when you wash it off”
Madhu:
“will you stop calling me Yaar? I am not your Yaar!!! Mind it!! Go and call you
Girl Friend with all that”
Black
Shirt Guy: “Hello, we can call a friend as Yaar too” and he enjoys at the way
Madhu gets irritated with him.
Madhu:
“Whatever don’t call me Yaar!!”
The
situation was brought under control by Pradeep. By now you would have guessed
who that Black shirt Guy is; yes you are right that’s our hero Anand. While
have dinner at the birthday party. Pradeep introduced his friends to Preethi’s
friends. Now Malini finds out the name of blue shirt guy (Karthick) and black
shirt guy (Anand). Anand strikes up a conversation with Madhu.
Anand:
“hi, I am Anand”
Madhu:
“okay”
Anand:
“hello you are supposed to say your names miss”
Madhu:
“did you hear Preethi call me as Madhu earlier”
Anand:
“that doesn't mean that you cannot tell once again”
Madhu:
“I don’t talk unnecessarily”
Anand:
“if so, then you shouldn't have said that fact itself, since you told it, this
is an unnecessary talk. So you do talk unnecessarily”
Madhu:
“arrghh can you stop annoying me now”
Anand:
“ha ha, so which college are you madhu?”
Madhu:
“I don’t have to tell you all that”
Anand:
“ha ha your wish madam”
The the
party is over now, Anand had reached home. For some reason he is not able to
sleep today. What could it be disturbing our Romeo? His phone rings with the
ringtone
“Vizhi
Moodi” (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7SMfBiTVEvE
)
This is
Anand’s ringtone, but it hasn’t disturbed him ever so far. But why would it
make him feel different right now? those where the thoughts running in his mind
with that 3 second gap before attending the call, It was Karthick As usual complaining
about his girlfriend. Anand was not paying much attention to Karthick. This was
quiet unusual of him. When Karthick started to fire him with questions, Anand
somehow tackled the situation. Karthick did ask “dude what happen? Do you miss
Meera? Is that why you are quiet unusual now?” Anand replied “Meera? no no noway,
why would I miss her? I am just tired going to sleep I guess”.
After the phone
call, Anand smiled to himself thinking “why would I miss that female Meera, she
is such a pain.” Crops up a notification on his laptop with a sound “ping.” It
was the party photos Preethi have already uploaded them. Thanks to Preethi
looking at those pictures now Anand knows the reason for his sleepless night
today. Yes you have guessed right!! Anand is smitten by Madhu. Looking at her
pictures, those dark brown magnetic eyes where giving out warm beautiful gaze. Madhu
has a beautiful smile. Anand realises he has a crush on Madhu. But how did he
not notice this alluring smile of her when she was just 5 feet away from him.
Next Chapter: http://passionofasoul.blogspot.co.uk/2012/12/friend-request-ch-2.html
is tis ur storiiiiieee...?
ReplyDelete@Raja: What made you think that? ;)
DeleteMadhu is a Imaginary character :) so does Anand
Gud one Ranjini.. Nice Attempt..*Applause* ^-^
ReplyDelete@Saffir: Thank you bro :) keep reading my blog will be updating regularly :)
DeleteSure sista. Its my pleasure to read ur blog on regular basis :-) Way to Go !!!
Delete@saffir: thanks :)
Deleteagain a good start..nicely portrayed jus like a story book..keep going:)
ReplyDeletethank you pranna :) keep reading will update you when i post my short story :)
Deletehey dear it is sooooo nice & quite descriptive as well !!! and not to forget, i'm happy that my name is also a part of the story :) :) good effort, keep going !! and one suggestion, i find many names are being used (written again & again)...that disturbs the feel..probably u can correct it if u feel i've a point !! else if you have a reason for it, keep going :) definitely it is very nice :) :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Preethi. Yes sure, will try to minimize the name usage next time. thanks for noticing it. ha ha yes I used your name. Character Preethi is very important for the story. She is going to help Madhu in all possible ways. she will have a great impact on the story overall :)
Deleteit was really a gud start :) gud attempt!! waitng fr d nxt one..
ReplyDeleteThank you Divya :) will release it by tomorrow night :) today will be uploading an another short story. do pass around to your friends da
DeleteVery nice, loving the first meet. Waiting for next chapters :D
ReplyDelete@Sidndhu :Thanks darling :) will upload them soon :D
Deletevery nicely portrayed the story but there are so many names which made me a little bit confused abt the characters, try to avoid it next time (Jst a suggestion)
ReplyDeleteBut after reading this chapter, something is making me to read the next part, so enthusiastic it is :)
thanks dear :) yeah sure, from next chapter on will try my best to avoid using too many names. :)
DeleteInteresting start :)
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